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Do you ever have trouble with choices and making decisions? Give some examples.

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2024-05-15 1141

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I had trouble in choosing my major and university. When I choose my major, I didn't know about the content of majors and what I like. It was an important decision that can affect my whole life so it was harder to make decisions.
For the university, my score was not bad but not good enough. The universities I could enter were good but they were not super good ones. So I was not sure if they worth the money for living in other areas. The universities were located in other areas. Also, if I go to university near my house then I could save lots of money, accept scholarship and raise a dog. And there were some advantages for getting a job after graduate. But it was not easy to throw away a chance to go to more popular university. But finally I choose electronic engineering in the university near my house. And I'm not sure if it was a good decision. For major, I don't know well about it yet. For the university, it can be combined with another university then I guess I will regret.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework! ^^
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel 
I had trouble in choosing my major and university. 
>> Correct!
OR: I struggled with deciding on a major and university. 
When I choose my major, I didn't know about the content of majors and what I like. 
>> Correct!
OR: When I chose my major, I had no idea about the content of majors or what I enjoyed. 
It was an important decision that can affect my whole life so it was harder to make decisions.
>> Correct!
OR: It was a difficult decision because it could have far-reaching consequences for my life.
For the university, my score was not bad but not good enough. 
>> Correct!
OR: My university score was not bad, but not good enough. 
The universities I could enter were good but they were not super good ones. 
>> Correct!
OR: The universities I could attend were good, but not particularly good. 
So I was not sure if they worth the money for living in other areas. 
>> Correct!
OR: So I was unsure whether they were worth the money for living in other areas. 
The universities were located in other areas. 
>> Correct!
OR: The universities were located in different areas. 
Also, if I go to university near my house then I could save lots of money, accept scholarship and raise a dog. 
>> Correct!
OR: Also, if I attend a university close to my home, I will be able to save a lot of money, accept scholarships, and raise a dog. 
And there were some advantages for getting a job after graduate. 
>> Correct!
OR: There were some advantages to getting a job after graduation. 
But it was not easy to throw away a chance to go to more popular university. 
>> Correct!
OR: However, turning down the opportunity to attend a more prestigious university was difficult. 
But finally I choose electronic engineering in the university near my house. And I'm not sure if it was a good decision.
>> Correct!
OR: But, in the end, I chose to study electronic engineering at a nearby university. And I am not sure if it was a good decision.
For major, I don't know well about it yet. 
>> Correct!
OR: I'm not sure about the major yet.
For the university, it can be combined with another university then I guess I will regret.
>> Correct!
OR: If the university can be combined with another university, I am afraid I will be disappointed.
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