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On balance, do you think that religions have made the world a better palce?

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Oh, it's such a difficult topic, I can't answer it. HAHA.
On balance, I think religion has made the world a better place.
There are many aspects of thinking that way, first of all, historically, when war broke out, it was a focal point and when there was discrimination, it allowed us to overcome it.
Also, if you think about the impact of religion on people, it makes you a person who can overcome difficulties and builds patience, and it seems to make people not live in disorder.
And I think it made people realize that everyone is a valuable person socially and helped them believe in the religion they want to believe freely.
But it's a problem because religion is causing another conflict and it's getting worse.
As religion is the subject of hate crimes, I think we should look carefully.

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Hello, Yun!
Talking about religion is kind of sensitive to discuss with other people therefore, I appreciate you for making the time to share your opinion. ^^
Chammy
Oh, it's such a difficult topic, I can't answer it. HAHA.
On balance, I think religion has made the world a better place.
There are many aspects of thinking that way, first of all, historically, when war broke out, it was a focal point and when there was discrimination, it allowed us to overcome it.
>> Correct 
Also, if you think about the impact of religion on people, it makes you a person who can overcome difficulties and builds patience, and it seems to make people not live in disorder.
>>Also, if you think about the impact of religion on people, it makes you a person who can overcome difficulties and build patience, and it seems to make people not live in disorder.
And I think it made people realize that everyone is a valuable person socially and helped them believe in the religion they want to believe freely.
But it's a problem because religion is causing another conflict and it's getting worse.
As religion is the subject of hate crimes, I think we should look carefully.
>> Correct 
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