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What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting rather than buying?

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One of the advantages of renting is it requires less money in one time. For example, if we buy a house, we have to pay much money at one time, but if we rent, we pay much less money at one time. Also, we can save our money by renting a product that we will use temporarily instead of buying it. Disadvantage of renting is the fact that there are many limits when we use the product. We should use it carefully, we can't lend it to others and we can only use it temporarily.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework! ^^
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-T.Jhozel 
One of the advantages of renting is it requires less money in one time. 
>> Correct!
OR: One of the benefits of renting is that it requires less money in one transaction. 
For example, if we buy a house, we have to pay much money at one time, but if we rent, we pay much less money at one time. 
>> Correct!
OR: For example, if we buy a house, we must pay a large sum of money all at once, whereas if we rent, we pay much less at once. 
Also, we can save our money by renting a product that we will use temporarily instead of buying it. 
>> Correct!
OR: We can also save money by renting rather than purchasing a product that we will only use temporarily. 
Disadvantage of renting is the fact that there are many limits when we use the product. 
>> Correct!
OR: The disadvantage of renting is that we have many limitations when using the product. 
We should use it carefully, we can't lend it to others and we can only use it temporarily.
>> Correct!
OR: We should use it with caution; we cannot lend it to others, and we can only use it temporarily.
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