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my thought about historical movies

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There are so many things about the inaccuracy in the history movies.
So, as a teacher, we have to correct and catch out points which is not the fact.
But I think movies are very efficient to take interest in the history.
The role of the movies is drawing people into the topic that the directors want to say about.
It is good for using movies to know about the presence of the specific history.
But It is also important what we know about correctly.

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Good Afternoon Maria! I was surprised with your essay. I thought you'll meet your friend after the class but I appreciate your effort on doing your homework first! It was really great meeting you today! I hope to see you next time! Enjoy learning the language. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
There are so many things about the inaccuracy in the history movies.
>>> There are so many inaccuracies in historical movies.
So, as a teacher, we have to correct and catch out points which is not the fact.
>>> So, as a teacher, we have to correct and fictitious movie scenes. 
But I think movies are very efficient to take interest in the history.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
The role of the movies is drawing people into the topic that the directors want to say about.
>>>CORRECT~!^^
It is good for using movies to know about the presence of the specific history.
>>> It is good to use movies to know about the presence of a specific history.
But It is also important what we know about correctly.
>>> But it is also important to know the history correctly.
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