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How do you understand the statement: ¡°Beauty is skin deep¡±?

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2024-05-09 2099

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I guess this statement means there are lots of more important things than beauty. And it also seems to underrate the importance of beauty. I agree with this statement partly. There are much more important things like personality, attitude and so on. But we can't ignore the impact of beauty. Also, I think beauty is not a trait that one person can say it's not important. Because it is decided by others and the importance of it is also decided by others. And many people consider beauty as an important thing. So I think beauty is a little deeper than skin. But I like this statement because it keeps us from overestimating beauty's importance.

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-T.Jhozel 
I guess this statement means there are lots of more important things than beauty. 
>> Correct!
OR: I suppose this statement means there are many more important things than beauty. 
And it also seems to underrate the importance of beauty. 
>> Correct!
OR: It also appears to undervalue the importance of beauty. 
I agree with this statement partly. 
>> Correct!
OR: I partially agree with this statement. 
There are much more important things like personality, attitude and so on. 
>> Correct!
OR: There are much more important factors, such as personality and attitude. 
But we can't ignore the impact of beauty. Also, I think beauty is not a trait that one person can say it's not important. 
>> Correct!
OR: However, we cannot ignore the significance of beauty. Also, I don't think beauty is a trait that one person can dismiss as unimportant. 
Because it is decided by others and the importance of it is also decided by others. 
>> Correct!
OR: Because it is decided by others, and its significance is determined by others. 
And many people consider beauty as an important thing. 
>> Correct!
OR: Many people value beauty as an important factor. 
So I think beauty is a little deeper than skin. But I like this statement because it keeps us from overestimating beauty's importance.
>> Correct!
OR: So, I believe beauty goes deeper than skin. But I like this statement because it keeps us from overestimating the importance of beauty.
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