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How do you judge food? By taste, appearance, smell, or feel? Can food be delicious if it looks terri

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There is an old saying in Korea that rice cakes that look good are delicious.
The taste of food is most important, but it also means that it must look delicious.
When choosing a restaurant to eat, I choose a place where there are a lot of customers.
Restaurants with a lot of customers will have good reviews from people who have already been there.
Also, since many people ate, the ingredients would be fresh.
When I actually went to a restaurant with a lot of customers and tried the food, it was really delicious.
In conclusion, I judge food by its taste, but I think it should look good.
On the other hand, even though food looks terrible, it can taste good, but I am not sure if it tastes good because I never try it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Sun! 

Judging food is a subjective experience, and people often use a combination of taste, appearance, smell, and texture to determine whether they enjoy a particular food. However, taste is typically the most important factor in determining whether a food is delicious or not.

- Kristine ^^ 

There is an old saying in Korea that rice cakes that look good are delicious.
>> Correct.
The taste of food is most important, but it also means that it must look delicious.
>> The food's taste is what matters most, but it also needs to look good.
When choosing a restaurant to eat, I choose a place where there are a lot of customers.
>> When choosing a restaurant to eat at, I choose a place where there are a lot of customers.
Restaurants with a lot of customers will have good reviews from people who have already been there.
>> Correct.
Also, since many people ate, the ingredients would be fresh.
>> Since many people were eating there, the ingredients would also be fresh.
When I actually went to a restaurant with a lot of customers and tried the food, it was really delicious.
>> The food was quite good when I finally went to a crowded restaurant.
In conclusion, I judge food by its taste, but I think it should look good.
>> Correct.
On the other hand, even though food looks terrible, it can taste good, but I am not sure if it tastes good because I never try it.
>> On the other hand, even though food looks terrible, it can taste good, but I am not sure if it tastes good because I have never tried it.
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