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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of knowing your personal color?


Many people want to good dress, wear makeup well, and look pretty or cool.
So people who interested in fashion they look for their personal color.
I think the pros of personal color will prevent me, if I buying clothes that not suit me.
And, when we wearing makeup, it will be help to easily choice cosmetics for our face.
But, if we want to know our personal color, we will meet cosmetic professional.
But, the personal color counselor, mostly they are beginners.
The reason why, trend of looking for our personal colors has started recently in Korea.
So people who beginner counselor, they require too expensive fees, but they are still less professional.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of knowing your personal color?



Many people want to good dress, wear makeup well, and look pretty or cool.
>> Many people want to dress and put on makeup well, and look pretty or cool.
So people who interested in fashion they look for their personal color.
>> So people who are interested in fashion look for their personal color.
I think the pros of personal color will prevent me, if I buying clothes that not suit me.
>> I think the pros of personal color will prevent me from buying clothes that don't suit me.
And, when we wearing makeup, it will be help to easily choice cosmetics for our face.
>> And, when we wear makeup, it will be help us to easily choose cosmetics for our face.
But, if we want to know our personal color, we will meet cosmetic professional.
>> But, if we want to know our personal color, we need to meet cosmetic professionals.
But, the personal color counselor, mostly they are beginners.
>> But, most personal color counselors are beginners.
The reason why, trend of looking for our personal colors has started recently in Korea.
>> The reason why that the trend of looking for our personal colors started recently in Korea.
So people who beginner counselor, they require too expensive fees, but they are still less professional.
>> So counselors who are beginners require too expensive fees, but they are still not that professional.
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