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Some embarrassing situations as a child.

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There were many moments when I felt awkward as a child.

One time when I stayed with my host family in the U.S., we went to the subway sandwich store. My host mom and sister said to me I had to choose my options for the sandwich fast because there was a line of people behind us. I couldn't choose my options fast enough(becuase so many ingredients made me confused) so other people passed me to get their sandwich. But I broke in line because I was suppose to be with my host family. Then, a lady behind me said to me I shouldn't break in line. I was very embarrased. I don't like the subway sandwich after that incident.
The other situation took place I was in elementary school. At that time, I was transferred to another school. One day, my friend and I made a mess on a blackboard and the teacher got very angry. She said;'WHO DONE THIS MESS!' I was so scared that I didn't say anything. Only my friend got to be blamed. I felt very ashamed of myself. I told her sorry to her after..

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Hello, Jin!
I appreciate you sharing your embarrassing experiences with me. I laughed, though I'm not sure how I feel about it. ^_^V At this age, those are experiences I would like not to have. To be honest, I don't want to feel embarrassed anymore. Hahahah >.<
Chammy

There were many moments when I felt awkward as a child.
One time when I stayed with my host family in the U.S.,
 We went to the Subway sandwich store.
 My host mom and sister said to me I had to choose my options for the sandwich fast because there was a line of people behind us.
>>Correct
 I couldn't choose my options fast enough(becuase so many ingredients made me confused) so other people passed me to get their sandwich. 
>>  I couldn't choose my options fast enough (because so many ingredients made me confused) so other people passed me to get their sandwiches. 
But I broke in line because I was suppose to be with my host family. 
>>But I broke in line because I was supposed to be with my host family. 
Then, a lady behind me said to me I shouldn't break in line. 
>>Correct
I was very embarrased. I don't like the subway sandwich after that incident.
>> I was very embarrassed. I don't like the Subway sandwich after that incident.
The other situation took place I was in elementary school.
>> The other situation took place when I was in elementary school.
 At that time, I was transferred to another school. 
One day, my friend and I made a mess on a blackboard and the teacher got very angry. 
She said;' WHO DONE THIS MESS!' I was so scared that I didn't say anything. 
Only my friend got to be blamed. I felt very ashamed of myself. 
>>Correct
I told her sorry to her after.
>>I apologized to her afterward.
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