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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think are the pros and cons of "cancel culture"?

These days, we living with have a various culture, opinion people and try to understand each others.
So, many sports stars and celebrities try to don't tell careless remarks and actions.
"Kanye west" is an example of the famous cancel culture.
He was make dangerous remarks.
So many companies and fans followed cancel culture to him.
And he did apologized for the dangerous remarks.
But, I think the Korea's cancel culture is strange.
It's because they do cancel culture for small reason and the others makes a too reproach.
Nowadays, we call it a internet(online) witch hunt.
In addition, if I give protective opinion, I'm also criticized.
I hope we have a culture where we respect each other.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think are the pros and cons of "cancel culture"?


These days, we living with have a various culture, opinion people and try to understand each others.
>> These days, we are living in a world with various cultures and opinions, and we try so hard to understand each others.
So, many sports stars and celebrities try to don't tell careless remarks and actions.
>> So, many star athletes and celebrities try not to tell or do any careless remarks actions.
"Kanye west" is an example of the famous cancel culture.
>>"Kanye west" is one of the examples of famous people who got canceled because of the cancel culture.
He was make dangerous remarks.
>> He makes dangerous remarks.
So many companies and fans followed cancel culture to him.
>> So many companies and fans canceled him.
OR >> So many companies and fans boycotted him.
And he did apologized for the dangerous remarks.
>> And he apologized for the dangerous remarks.
OR >> He made an apology for his malicious remarks.
But, I think the Korea's cancel culture is strange.
>> CORRECT!
It's because they do cancel culture for small reason and the others makes a too reproach.
>> It's because they cancel certain people for small reasons, and the others show a heavy reproach.
Nowadays, we call it a internet(online) witch hunt.
>> Nowadays, we call it an internet (online) witch hunt.
In addition, if I give a protective opinion, I'm also criticized.
>> CORRECT!
I hope we have a culture where we respect each other.
>> CORRECT!

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