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What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who\'s the main actor or

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The last movie I watched at the cinema is "Wonka".
Wonka is a movie about chocolate.
Timothee Chalamet is the main actor of the movie.
I like Timothee Chalamet in the movie.
I think the movie's main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.

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Good Tuesday evening, Jimmy!

I'm sending you back your corrected homework. As always, please go over the corrections and alternative expressions, such as "chocolatier". Good night and see you tomorrow!


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                       What was the last movie you watched at the cinema? What is the movie about? Who's the main actor or actress?


The last movie I watched at the cinema is "Wonka".
>> The last movie I watched at the cinema was "Wonka".

Wonka is a movie about chocolate.
>> Wonka is a movie about a chocolatier. 

Timothee Chalamet is the main actor of the movie.
>> Timothee Chalamet is the main actor in the movie.

I like Timothee Chalamet in the movie.
>> OR: I became a fan of Timothee Chalamet after watching this movie. 

I think the movie's main scene is Wonka saved peoples in danger and put out bad bosses.
>> I think the movie's climax is when Wonka saves people in danger and puts out bad bosses.

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