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Do you feel social media impacts beauty standards today? How so?

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2024-05-07 2039

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I think so. Social media changes beauty standard easily and fast. The reason why it is possible is that it reduces barrier for conversations. Social media makes people interact more and lots of interact pushes people to have similar thought. So through social media, it is easier for social media users to have similar thought about beauty. And it's enough to form beauty standards because many people do social media. But even social media can't easily break the language barrier. And I think that's one of the big reasons why beauty standards are different by nations.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework! ^^
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-T.Jhozel 
I think so. Social media changes beauty standard easily and fast. 
>> Correct!
OR: I believe so. Social media changes beauty standards quickly and easily. 
The reason why it is possible is that it reduces barrier for conversations. 
>> Correct!
OR: It is possible because it reduces the barriers to conversation. 
Social media makes people interact more and lots of interact pushes people to have similar thought. 
>> Correct!
OR: Social media encourages people to interact more, and a lot of interaction leads to similar thoughts. 
So through social media, it is easier for social media users to have similar thought about beauty. 
>> Correct!
OR: As a result, social media users are more likely to share similar views on beauty. 
And it's enough to form beauty standards because many people do social media. 
>> Correct!
OR: And because many people use social media, it is sufficient to establish beauty standards. 
But even social media can't easily break the language barrier. 
>> Correct!
OR: However, even social media cannot easily overcome the language barrier. 
And I think that's one of the big reasons why beauty standards are different by nations.
>> Correct!
OR:  And I believe that is one of the main reasons why beauty standards differ across countries.

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