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I want to be a real estate investor.
Originally, I think real estate investment is something that rich people do.
I want to be rich, so I plan to become a real estate investor and invest again with the house and land I got after a week of experience.
And I will organize a plan to end the rest of my life in a country house with a large yard.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It sounds like you have a clear vision for your future as a real estate investor, Da Hye! Your ambition and determination to pursue this path are admirable. Real estate investment can indeed be a fruitful endeavor, offering opportunities for financial growth and stability. It's great to hear that you're thinking strategically about your investments and have plans for the future. Building wealth through real estate can be a wise decision, and your willingness to start small and gain experience shows a thoughtful approach to your goals. Dreaming of a country house with a large yard sounds like a wonderful aspiration. Visualizing your long-term goals can provide motivation and direction as you work towards them. Remember, success in real estate investment often requires patience, persistence, and continuous learning. Stay focused on your objectives, seek out opportunities for growth, and don't hesitate to seek advice or mentorship along the way. I believe you have the drive and determination to achieve your dreams in the world of real estate. Keep moving forward, and I'm excited to see where your journey takes you! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

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OR>>I'd like to be a real estate investor. 

Originally, I think real estate investment is something that rich people do. 

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OR>>Originally, I thought that real estate investment was something that rich people do. 

I want to be rich, so I plan to become a real estate investor and invest again with the house and land I got after a week of experience. 

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OR>>I want to become wealthy, so I'm planning to become a real estate investor and invest again with house and land after I got a week of experience. 

And I will organize a plan to end the rest of my life in a country house with a large yard. 

>>I will organize a plan to end the rest of my life in a country house with a large yard. 

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