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It\'s very difficult to help at no cost.

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2024-05-02 1731

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I think I can help you.
Of course, it's only possible in places where there are many people who can help me.
I'm not brave and I'm not just.
I just don't like it happening in front of my eyes.
Sometimes I helped those children, but as a result, they were bullied or abused, so I don't try to help anymore.
Also, the friends I helped avoided when I got hit.
I hate people who are rude, stupid, and selfish.
I hate more than children who bully others because of their superiority.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It sounds like you've had some challenging experiences with helping others, and it's understandable that you're feeling discouraged. Witnessing negative outcomes after offering help can be disheartening, especially when it leads to feelings of frustration and disappointment. 

It's important to recognize that helping others is a complex endeavor, and sometimes our efforts may not yield the outcomes we hope for. However, your willingness to extend assistance despite these setbacks is a testament to your compassion and empathy. 

While it's natural to feel disheartened by negative experiences, it's essential not to let them overshadow the positive impact you can have. It's also crucial to set boundaries and prioritize your well-being in situations where helping may put you at risk or cause undue harm. 

Remember, being selective about where and how you offer help doesn't make you any less compassionate. It shows wisdom and self-awareness. As you navigate these challenges, know that your intentions to help are valuable, and your efforts, no matter how small, can make a difference in someone's life. 

Take care of yourself and know that it's okay to take a step back when needed. Your kindness and empathy are qualities to be cherished, and I'm here to support you as you continue to navigate these complexities. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think I can help you. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I feel like I can lend a hand sometimes. 

Of course, it's only possible in places where there are many people who can help  

me. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>It usually works better when there are others around to help too. 

I'm not brave and I'm not just. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I'm not exactly the bravest or fairest person around. 

I just don't like it happening in front of my eyes. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I don't like seeing bad things happen in front of my eyes. 

Sometimes I helped those children, but as a result, they were bullied or abused, so I don't try to help anymore. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I used to help out here and there. But it often didn't turn out too great, and they ended up getting treated even worse. So, I've kind of stopped trying to help. 

Also, the friends I helped avoided when I got hit. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>And the friends I helped had avoided me when I needed help. 

I hate people who are rude, stupid, and selfish. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I can't stand people who are rude, clueless, or only care about themselves. 

I hate more than children who bully others because of their superiority. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>There's nothing I hate more than children who bully others just because of their superiority. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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