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Have you ever volunteered to help after a natural disaster? If so, what would you like to volunteer

작성자: 박*호
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회원님의 영작문

Korea is not a country with many natural disasters that cause casualties, such as large-scale earthquakes.
Natural disasters in Korea are mainly caused by typhoons that occur in the summer, and in most cases, crops or houses are flooded.
When flood damage occurs due to a typhoon, civil servants working in related departments take the lead, and local residents and soldiers are mobilized to carry out restoration work.
And rather than directly participating in the recovery work, ordinary citizens like me donate food, blankets, and money needed for recovery to flood-damaged residents.
And sometimes, in cases where flood damage is very severe, I participate directly as a volunteer with permission from the company.
In these cases, since I am not an expert, I mainly help carry goods, clean houses that have been flooded.
Participating as a volunteer seems to contribute to providing psychological stability to affected residents by knowing that people around them are with them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Sun!

Thank you for doing your homework! See you in class tomorrow!

- Kristine ^^ 

Korea is not a country with many natural disasters that cause casualties, such as large-scale earthquakes.
>> Correct.
Natural disasters in Korea are mainly caused by typhoons that occur in the summer, and in most cases, crops or houses are flooded.
>> Correct.
When flood damage occurs due to a typhoon, civil servants working in related departments take the lead, and local residents and soldiers are mobilized to carry out restoration work.
>> Civil servants in associated departments take the lead in restoring flood-damaged areas caused by typhoons, and locals and soldiers are called upon to assist.
And rather than directly participating in the recovery work, ordinary citizens like me donate food, blankets, and money needed for recovery to flood-damaged residents.
>> Instead of actively helping with the rehabilitation process, ordinary citizens like me give flood-damaged residents food, blankets, and money they need to recover.
And sometimes, in cases where flood damage is very severe, I participate directly as a volunteer with permission from the company.
>> Additionally, with the company's permission, I occasionally directly assist as a volunteer in situations when there has been major flood damage.
In these cases, since I am not an expert, I mainly help carry goods, clean houses that have been flooded.
>> In these cases, since I am not an expert, I mainly help carry goods and clean houses that have been flooded.
Participating as a volunteer seems to contribute to providing psychological stability to affected residents by knowing that people around them are with them.
>> Participating as a volunteer seems to contribute to providing psychological stability to affected residents by letting them know that people around them are with them.
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