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What is Hachiko

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Hachiko is a dog that is famous for its loyalty. Hachiko was a dog of Japanese professor named Ueno. He always went to station with Hachiko when he goes to work and Hachiko welcomed him at the station when he came back. But someday Ueno passed away. Hachiko waited for his owner but he didn't show up. Hachiko came back home and from that day Hachiko ate nothing for 3days.
Hachiko's story became famous in Japan so statue of Hachiko has created. It became landmark of Shibuya.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Hachiko's story was very touching, wasn't it?  Thank you for writing your homework! ^^
-T.Jhozel 
Hachiko is a dog that is famous for its loyalty. 
>> Correct!
OR: 
The dog Hachiko is well-known for its loyalty. 
Hachiko was a dog of Japanese professor named Ueno. 
>> Correct!
OR:  
The Japanese professor Ueno owned a dog named Hachiko.
He always went to station with Hachiko when he goes to work and Hachiko welcomed him at the station when he came back. 
>> Correct!
OR: 
Every morning, he accompanied Hachiko to the station where he works, and upon his return, Hachiko greeted him.
But someday Ueno passed away. Hachiko waited for his owner but he didn't show up. 
>> But eventually, Ueno died. Hachiko waited for his owner, but he did not show up. 
Hachiko came back home and from that day Hachiko ate nothing for 3days.
>> Hachiko returned home and did not eat anything for the next three days.
Hachiko's story became famous in Japan so statue of Hachiko has created. It became landmark of Shibuya
>> Correct!
OR: Hachiko's story became well-known in Japan, so a statue of Hachiko was created. It became the landmark of Shibuya.
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