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What is the best advice you could everr give someone?

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Well, it depends on the situation, but I can tell you to cheer up first.
You know my situation these days, right?
I'm giving myself the best advice than others.
There's something I'm saying to console myself to relieve stress and get out of depression.
"I'm more beautiful and precious than someone else, so let's be confident!"
It also gives me high self-esteem and encourages me to cheer up.
When I fail an exam or a company, there's saying that says, "A company that doesn't recognize my value is stupid."
And let's warm myself up and get ready to move on.
Also, there's something my parents tell me often.
"Baby, you're jewel that someone has yet to find. Someone who recognizes your worth will appear and polish you to shine."
I don't think I have time to fell moved and defeated when I hear this.
And then I think. "Yes, I'm the proud daughter of my parents."

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Hello, Yun!
I hope we can always keep and put into practice the good pieces of advice you have. In this way, we can at least motivate ourselves to see the better side. 
Chammy
Well, it depends on the situation, but I can tell you to cheer up first.
You know my situation these days, right?
I'm giving myself the best advice than others.
There's something I'm saying to console myself to relieve stress and get out of depression.
"I'm more beautiful and precious than someone else, so let's be confident!"
It also gives me high self-esteem and encourages me to cheer up.
>>Correct
When I fail an exam or a company, there's saying that says, "A company that doesn't recognize my value is stupid."
>>When I fail an exam or a company, there's saying that says, "A company that doesn't recognize my value is stupid."
And let's warm myself up and get ready to move on.
Also, there's something my parents tell me often.
"Baby, you're jewel that someone has yet to find. Someone who recognizes your worth will appear and polish you to shine."
>>"Baby, you're a jewel that someone has yet to find. Someone who recognizes your worth will appear and polish you to shine."
I don't think I have time to fell moved and defeated when I hear this.
And then I think. "Yes, I'm the proud daughter of my parents."
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