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I like coffee, so I like both coffee at home and coffee at the cafe. Coffee at home on weekends is better because you can afford it, and coffee at the cafe goes to enjoy the atmosphere or just to drink coffee without special purpose. It is probably due to the atmosphere that the taste of coffee at home, the taste of coffee at the park, and the taste of coffee at the coffee shop all feel different.

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Thank you for writing your homework, Mia. I also enjoy my coffee at home and the cafe, though I have to admit that coffee at the cafe tastes better.  Do you agree? 
-Khai
I like coffee, so I like both coffee at home and coffee at the cafe. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Coffee is my favorite. So, I like drinking coffee at home and the cafe.

Coffee at home on weekends is better because you can afford it, and coffee at the cafe goes to enjoy the atmosphere or just to drink coffee without special purpose. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Having coffee at home is more affordable, and having coffee at the cafe is enjoying the atmosphere or simply drinking coffee.

It is probably due to the atmosphere that the taste of coffee at home, the taste of coffee at the park, and the taste of coffee at the coffee shop all feel different.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> The taste of the coffee may vary whether you are at home, at the cafe, or in the park.


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