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There are two cases that we can miss deadlines, laziness or inevitability.
In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured about following.
In the later case, individuals face unexpected events or reality wall like task level/amount.
I've tried to comply with the deadlines of company and school in terms of my evaluation.
When it comes to private study or working out, I do much more than before by spending time.

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Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Great reflection! You're on the right track. Keep up the proactive effort in managing your time effectively!
~T. Jenna

There are two cases that we can miss deadlines, laziness or inevitability.
>>
There are two cases where we can miss deadlines: laziness or inevitability.
OR
>>We may miss deadlines for two reasons: either due to laziness or because of circumstances beyond our control.
In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured about following.
>>In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured to follow.
OR
>>In the former scenario, occurrences are frequent due to the absence of pressure on individuals to adhere.
In the later case, individuals face unexpected events or reality wall like task level/amount.
>>In the latter case, individuals face/encounter unexpected events or a reality wall/check like the level or amount of tasks.
OR
>>In the latter scenario, individuals confront unforeseen events or encounter a reality check, such as the level or volume of tasks they must handle.
I've tried to comply with the deadlines of company and school in terms of my evaluation.
>>I've tried to comply with the deadlines of my company and school in terms of my evaluations.
OR
>>I've made a concerted effort to meet both the company's and school's deadlines for my evaluations.
When it comes to private study or working out, I do much more than before by spending time.
>>When it comes to private study or working out, I spend much more time than before.
OR
>>When it comes to private study or exercising, I've significantly increased the time I dedicate.
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