¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Deadline

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÓ*Áø
2024-04-25 319

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

There are two cases that we can miss deadlines, laziness or inevitability.
In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured about following.
In the later case, individuals face unexpected events or reality wall like task level/amount.
I've tried to comply with the deadlines of company and school in terms of my evaluation.
When it comes to private study or working out, I do much more than before by spending time.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Great reflection! You're on the right track. Keep up the proactive effort in managing your time effectively!
~T. Jenna

There are two cases that we can miss deadlines, laziness or inevitability.
>>
There are two cases where we can miss deadlines: laziness or inevitability.
OR
>>We may miss deadlines for two reasons: either due to laziness or because of circumstances beyond our control.
In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured about following.
>>In the former case, it can happen frequently since individuals aren't pressured to follow.
OR
>>In the former scenario, occurrences are frequent due to the absence of pressure on individuals to adhere.
In the later case, individuals face unexpected events or reality wall like task level/amount.
>>In the latter case, individuals face/encounter unexpected events or a reality wall/check like the level or amount of tasks.
OR
>>In the latter scenario, individuals confront unforeseen events or encounter a reality check, such as the level or volume of tasks they must handle.
I've tried to comply with the deadlines of company and school in terms of my evaluation.
>>I've tried to comply with the deadlines of my company and school in terms of my evaluations.
OR
>>I've made a concerted effort to meet both the company's and school's deadlines for my evaluations.
When it comes to private study or working out, I do much more than before by spending time.
>>When it comes to private study or working out, I spend much more time than before.
OR
>>When it comes to private study or exercising, I've significantly increased the time I dedicate.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
136265 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 1
136264 Taking the front row seats ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 318
136263 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 2
136262 Is a traffic jam a good excuse for being late for an appointment? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 3
136261 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 0
136260 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 0
136259 Why do you like india? Explain your answer. Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 344
136258 Make a sentence using the words below Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 388
136257 Homework ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 347
136256 What is your favorite Korean dish? Can you describe how it\'s... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 428
136255 Homework ±è*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 273
136254 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 1
136253 homework ±è*º° ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 4
136252 I was upset ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 1
136251 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 1
136250 Homework ±Ç*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 1
136249 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 252
136248 Homework À±*¼± ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 326
136247 Why does a company need to do an interview before hiring? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 349
136246 HW ³ª*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-09 339

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04