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Yes I like Harry porter series and big fan of the Harry porter.
But I like movie than book.
Because book is very long so I read while drowsy.
Especially I watched each series minimum 3-5times.
Among them I most like half-blood prince.
Because i sad to die of Dumbledore and betrayal of professor snake.
I still remember spell. The spell is abracadabra.
I know betrayal of snake.
But... through different way, he can alive Dumbledore.
Anyway Harry porter series is very interesting.
So, i went to harry portter school whit my friends when I went to Universal studio in Osaka.
It's very fun and interesting memories.

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Hi Matthew!^^ 

I know a lot of people like Harry Potter but I am really not a fan. 
With all honesty, I didn't even watch all the movies. 
I like the characters though but I just can't pin point the reason on why I am not a fan of it. 

Andrea

Yes I like Harry porter series and big fan of the Harry porter.
>> Yes, I like Harry Potter and I am a big fan of him. 

But I like movie than book.
>> But I like the movie more than the book. 

Because book is very long so I read while drowsy.
>> The book is very long and so I feel drowsy when reading it. 

Especially I watched each series minimum 3-5times.
>> Especially, I watch each series 3-5 times. 

Among them I most like half-blood prince.
>> Among all the books, I like the Half-blood Prince the most. 

Because i sad to die of Dumbledore and betrayal of professor snake.
>> I was sad that Dumbledore died and the betrayal of Professor Snape. 

I still remember spell. The spell is abracadabra.
>> I still remember the abracadabra spell. 

I know betrayal of snake.
>> I know Snape's betrayal. 

But... through different way, he can alive Dumbledore.
>> But... He is capable of bringing Dumbledore back to life in various ways.

Anyway Harry porter series is very interesting.
>> Anyway, Harry Potter series is very interesting. 

So, i went to harry portter school whit my friends when I went to Universal studio in Osaka.
>> So, when visiting Universal Studios in Osaka, I went to Harry Potter School with my friends.
It's very fun and interesting memories.
>> It's a lot of fun and brings back interesting memories.
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