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When should we decline an invitation?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-04-24 404

회원님의 영작문



HAHAHAHA, It got too long as I used it.
Thank you so much for your consolation today.
Thanks to you, I decided to meet my friend and have fun and move on again from tomorrow!
Enjoy your class on Friday, Chammy!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!
I appreciate your consistent effort in completing your homework. I completely agree with the idea that we should learn how to turn down invitations, particularly if we don't feel like accepting them. Particularly for someone like me who generally finds it difficult to say no...Hehe~ I hope to see you on Friday. See you on Friday~
Chammy

It got too long as I used it.

>> I wrote it as long as I used to.

Thank you so much for your consolation today.

>>Correct
Thanks to you, I decided to meet my friend and have fun and move on again from tomorrow!

>> Thanks to you, I decided to meet my friend to have fun and move on again from tomorrow!
Enjoy your class on Friday, Chammy!

>>Correct

I think there are a lot of situations.

First, I think you should decline an invitation when you aren't happy.

It's because you can express that you aren't feeling good after accepting an invitation when you aren't feeling good.

Second, if you feel uncomfortable accepting the invitation or if you don't like it, you should reject an invitation.

Because in my experience, in this case, there's a remarkably high probability that something bad like a fight will happen.

>>Correct

Third, if you have a friend you don't like or a friend don't like me in the invitation you're trying to go to, it's a good idea to refuse.

>> Third, if you have a friend you don't like or a friend doesn't like you in the invitation you're trying to go to, it's a good idea to refuse.

It's a pleasant invitation, but if there's someone who makes you feel bad, you can't enjoy it, and it can cause unnecessary conflict.

Fourth, I can't go to a personal matter.

For example, you can't accept an invitation if when a family member has something to happen or something urgent to deal with.

>>For example, you can't accept an invitation when a family member has something to happen or something urgent to deal with.

Fifth, you have to take a rest.

If you're in a very tired situation or don't want to go, it's a good idea to refuse an invitation.

I think for anyone, the situation of having to say no may be different.

But I think it's more important to know how to refuse an invitation so that we don't hurt each other

>>Correct


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