¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*Á¦
2024-04-24 214

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think that history should be required as a subject. History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their point of views and more. And sometimes there have been some embarrasing histories of our ancestors and our job is not to hide it, but to lean the mistake from our ancestors and make sure that we don'tt make the same mistake again.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Minje!
Absolutely! History isn't just about memorizing dates and events; it's about understanding how our ancestors lived, what shaped their perspectives, and the lessons we can learn from their experiences, both triumphs, and mistakes. 
Good job! ^^
~ Teacher Maxine

I think that history should be required as a subject. 
>> CORRECT

History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their point of views and more. 
>> History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their points of view, and more.

And sometimes there have been some embarrasing histories of our ancestors and our job is not to hide it, but to lean the mistake from our ancestors and make sure that we don'tt make the same mistake again.
>> Sometimes, there have been embarrassing histories of our ancestors, and our job is not to hide them but to learn from their mistakes and ensure that we don't repeat them.


¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
136366 In Korea, there are many people who fawn on Mondays. À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-04-13 293
136365 These are my favorite days :) À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-04-13 197
136364 If I could have chosen any job, I wanted to be an astrophysicist. À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-04-13 171
136363 Rest is very important! À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-04-13 316
136362 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 2
136361 What was the last thing you accepted? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 1
136360 Homework Àå*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 243
136359 homework 04.12 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 168
136358 What is the most famous restaurant in your country and what is... ½Å*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 194
136357 My personality ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 219
136356 About my neighborhood ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 168
136355 In what ways does your family provide support during tough... ¿À*¼Ø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 2
136354 Do you enjoy outdoor activities like hiking or camping? Why or... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 250
136353 Can you describe a typical family dinner in your household? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 304
136352 HW ³ª*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 201
136351 What do you think is the most dangerous insect? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 158
136350 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 205
136349 2024.04.11 ³²*·Ê ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 248
136348 What do you think about eating disorders such as Anorexia and... À±*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 2
136347 Do you think you\'re a naturally hard-working person? Why or why... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-12 226

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04