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Do you think you have a healthy eating habit?

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I think I have both healthy and bad eating habit.
Eating lots of vegetable and fruit is good one, having much sweet food is bad one.
Depending on cafein for awaking is also my bad eating habit.

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Thank you for this Ms. Jade!

I think I have both healthy and bad eating habits.
>>>  correct 
Eating lots of vegetable and fruit is good one, having much sweet food is bad one.
>>> Eating lots of vegetables and fruits is the good one, having too much sweet food is the bad one.  
Depending on cafein for awaking is also my bad eating habit.
>>> Depending on caffeine to be awake is also my bad eating habit.
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