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There are times when we met on the Internet and became friends, and there are times when we played together at school and became friends.
Most of my other friends are introduced to me by my friends.
I have a very narrow relationship.
But I don't think it's good to have a lot of friends.
I think these friends are the best for me right now, just preferring to maintain deep and good relationships with a few people who have the same interests. :)

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Hi Da Hye,

Your message touched my heart! It's truly wonderful to hear your thoughts and feelings. Friendship is such a precious treasure, whether it's formed online or at school. I'm so glad to be a part of your journey as your teacher and friend. You're absolutely right about the importance of deep, meaningful connections over sheer numbers. Quality over quantity, always! Your approach to nurturing these special friendships shows maturity and wisdom beyond your years.

Thank you for being such a wonderful student and friend. Remember, I'm always here to support you along your journey!

~Teacher Cathy

 

There are times when we met on the Internet and became friends, and there are times when we played together at school and became friends.

>>There were times when we met on the Internet and became friends, and there were times when we played together at school and became friends.

Most of my other friends are introduced to me by my friends.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Most of my other friends were introduced to me through my friends.

I have a very narrow relationship.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I have a limited circle of friends.

But I don't think it's good to have a lot of friends.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I don't think having a lot of friends is necessarily good.

I think these friends are the best for me right now, just preferring to maintain deep and good relationships with a few people who have the same interests. :)

>>I think these friends are the best for me right now, I just prefer to maintain deep and good relationships with a few people who have the same interests. :)

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