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회원님의 영작문

Although not directly in game development, I have accumulated experience in cooperative content production processes. I've been interested in conveying narratives and content since childhood, and I've collaborated in various fields such as film, theater, and content planning since entering university. Working with large teams, including senior graduates, I've learned how to navigate challenges and find solutions while creating a single piece of work. Additionally, I've been gaining practical experience in content platform operation. Since game development also involves collaborating with various teams, both internally like translation and design teams, and externally like content providers, I believe my experience in cooperation can naturally be beneficial. Understanding that game IPs often transition into webtoons, animations, or movies, my experience in realizing the potential of IPs while working at a webtoon company emphasizes my ongoing interest in content and IPs.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Eugene! ^^
Your experience and background sound incredibly valuable, especially in the realm of content production and collaboration. Moreover, your understanding of the broader ecosystem, including the potential for game IPs to transition into other forms of media like webtoons, animations, or movies, showcases your forward-thinking approach. Keep it up!
~ Teacher Maxine

Although not directly in game development, I have accumulated experience in cooperative content production processes. 
>> CORRECT

I've been interested in conveying narratives and content since childhood, and I've collaborated in various fields such as film, theater, and content planning since entering university. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> My passion for storytelling dates back to childhood, and I have actively engaged in collaborative projects across various domains such as film, theater, and content planning since university.

Working with large teams, including senior graduates, I've learned how to navigate challenges and find solutions while creating a single piece of work. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> Through my involvement in projects with diverse teams, including seasoned professionals, I have honed my ability to tackle challenges and devise solutions while working towards a unified vision.

Additionally, I've been gaining practical experience in content platform operation. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> Furthermore, I have been actively acquiring practical skills in content platform operation.

Since game development also involves collaborating with various teams, both internally like translation and design teams, and externally like content providers, I believe my experience in cooperation can naturally be beneficial. 
>> CORRECT

Understanding that game IPs often transition into webtoons, animations, or movies, my experience in realizing the potential of IPs while working at a webtoon company emphasizes my ongoing interest in content and IPs.
>> CORRECT
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