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1. What would you like to know about your country?
>>> I wonder How do the other country think about our division between south and north korea. Our people have suffered massive pain of division and war. As I know, Korea is the last division country among worlds. There are many difficult things to solve. But Thinking a person who have lost their familly, We must unify the country.

2. When is the best time to visit your place?
>>> It might be spring! During short period in spring, maybe 10 days, Oriental cherry blossoms. Oriental cherry's color is mixed with white and pink and it looks so beautiful. If anyone is taked photo under oriental cherry tree, It will be your life-photo.

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Hello, Brian!
Thank you for sharing this. 
We hope for a future where Korea can stand united once again. 
On the other hand, oriental cherry blossoms are indeed a marvel of springtime beauty. Capturing a moment beneath these blossoms is like freezing a piece of eternity in a photograph. It's no wonder they're cherished as life-photos, preserving the essence of that fleeting but enchanting season. 🌸
~ Teacher Maxine 

I wonder How do the other country think about our division between south and north korea. 
>> I wonder how other countries perceive the division between South and North Korea.

Our people have suffered massive pain of division and war. 
>> Our people have suffered immense pain due to division and war.

As I know, Korea is the last division country among worlds. 
>> As far as I know, Korea is the last divided country in the world.

There are many difficult things to solve. But Thinking a person who have lost their familly, We must unify the country.
>> There are many challenges to overcome, but when considering those who have lost their families, we must strive to unify the country.

It might be spring! 
>> CORRECT

During short period in spring, maybe 10 days, Oriental cherry blossoms. 
>> During a short period in spring, perhaps around 10 days, Oriental cherry blossoms bloom.

Oriental cherry's color is mixed with white and pink and it looks so beautiful. 
>> Oriental cherry blossoms have a beautiful mix of white and pink colors.

If anyone is taked photo under oriental cherry tree, It will be your life-photo.
>> If anyone takes a photo under an Oriental cherry tree, it will become a cherished life photo.


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