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How do other people\'s opinions affect your decisions and actions?

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When my friend has different opinion to me, I usually don't disagree in front of them. I find a part that I can agree with and then I agree with that. But when I totally disagree to that opinion, I ask them reasons why they thought like that. Sometimes, my opinion changes and I have same opinions with them later. So my friends' opinions affect my decisions and actions gradually. But for my parents' case, they persuade me to do what they want. Then I usually follow because I know I can't win and I always have been persuaded by them. But when I think my opinion is undistributable, I tell them my opinion and they agree they were wrong.

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Hi Seong Eun, 

Great job on completing your homework! It sounds like you have a thoughtful approach to considering other people's opinions while also staying true to your own beliefs. It's important to be open to different perspectives and sometimes that can even lead you to change your mind. It's also great that you stand up for your opinions, especially when you feel strongly about them. Keep balancing openness to others' ideas with your own convictions, and you'll continue to grow in understanding and confidence. 

~Teacher Cathy  

 

When my friend has different opinion to me, I usually don't disagree in front of them. I find a part that I can agree with and then I agree with that.  

>>When my friend has a different opinion from me, I usually don't disagree in front of them. I find a part that I can agree with and then I agree with that.  

But when I totally disagree to that opinion, I ask them reasons why they thought like that.  

>>But when I totally disagree with that opinion, I ask them reasons why they thought like that.  

Sometimes, my opinion changes and I have same opinions with them later.  

>>Sometimes, my opinion changes and I have the same opinions with them later.  

So my friends' opinions affect my decisions and actions gradually.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>So, my friends' opinions gradually influence my decisions and actions. 

But for my parents' case, they persuade me to do what they want.  

>>But in my parents' case, they persuade me to do what they want.  

Then I usually follow because I know I can't win and I always have been persuaded by them.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Then, I usually go along with them because I know I can't win, and I've always been persuaded by them. 

But when I think my opinion is undistributable, I tell them my opinion and they agree they were wrong. 

>>But when I think my opinion is indisputable, I tell them my opinion, and they agree they were wrong.

 

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