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TikTok and Samsung Lions

작성자: 임*준
2024-04-23 1283

회원님의 영작문

1. What are the latest trends in your country?
>>>People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL's dance challenge. when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks. I listened to song "Look at me" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival. It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.

2. What’s the latest news?
>>> The baseball team "Samsung lions" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the "Samsung lions" has a bad news at 2016. So I don't have had a interst since 2016. But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to "Samsung lions park" that is baseball stadim for "Samsung lions". And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of "Samsung lions" that was different with a team I had knew. The lastest news is that lions won last match

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Brian!
It sounds like you had quite the experience at the Samsung Lions Park! It's fascinating how a change in lineup can reignite interest in a team. Looks like the Lions are back on track with their recent victory!
~ Teacher Maxine

People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL's dance challenge. 
>> People like TikTok challenges, especially those featuring famous idols' dance challenges.

when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks. 
>> When I was a big fan of TWICE, whenever a new album was released, I listened to all their songs, including the non-title tracks.

I listened to song "Look at me" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival. 
>> I listened to the song "Look at Me" during that time, but nowadays, because of the TikTok challenge, this song is experiencing a revival.

It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.
>> It's the latest TikTok trend song, so I'm amazed because I listened to this song six years ago when it wasn't famous.

The baseball team "Samsung lions" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the "Samsung lions" has a bad news at 2016. So I don't have had a interst since 2016. 
>> The baseball team "Samsung Lions" is supported by Daegu, and I used to be a fan of theirs naturally. However, the "Samsung Lions" had bad news in 2016, so I lost interest.

But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to "Samsung lions park" that is baseball stadim for "Samsung lions". 
>> But last Saturday, my girlfriend and I went to "Samsung Lions Park," the baseball stadium for the "Samsung Lions."

And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of "Samsung lions" that was different with a team I had knew. 
>> I found myself extremely interested in the new lineup of the "Samsung Lions," which was different from the team I knew.

The lastest news is that lions won last match
>> The latest news is that the Lions won their last match.

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