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Sensible gift

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Is there a special gift you like to get? What is it and why?

>>> I want to get a sensible gift which fulfills my present need. For example, in winter I actually don\'t want to get warm clothes. As you know, I sweat much. But maybe there will be a man who gives me socks or gloves. This case is what I don\'t like. To satisfy my need, giver usually checks my condition closely and should have a sense. And I think, it means that if you wants to give me a gift, you should be concerned me first. I want to get a mind for me.

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Hello, Brian! 
It's always nice to receive gifts that cater to our specific needs and preferences. It's not just about the gift itself, but the thought and effort behind it that truly matter. Thanks for sharing your perspective!
~ Teacher Maxine


I want to get a sensible gift which fulfills my present need. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> I want to get a sensible gift that fulfills my present need.

For example, in winter I actually don\'t want to get warm clothes. 
>> For example, in winter, I actually don't want to receive warm clothes.

As you know, I sweat much. 
>> As you know, I sweat a lot.

But maybe there will be a man who gives me socks or gloves. 
>> But maybe there will be someone who gives me socks or gloves.

This case is what I don\'t like. 
>> This is something I don't like.

To satisfy my need, giver usually checks my condition closely and should have a sense. 
>> To satisfy my needs, the giver usually checks my condition closely and should have a sense of it.

And I think, it means that if you wants to give me a gift, you should be concerned me first. 
>> And I think it means that if you want to give me a gift, you should be concerned about me first.

I want to get a mind for me.
>> I want to receive a gift that reflects consideration for me.
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