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2024-04-22 1058

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Hello
Homework is very hard.
I don't think about this question.
So many think about this question due to weekend.
I will listen to other people decisions.
It is bed decisions that my feel is very down.
And I effort fix the my action or word.
But, I forgot very fast(may be maximum 1day).
And I action the same as usual.

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Hello Matthew, 

I hope you're doing well! Let me help you understand the homework question a bit better. The question is asking how the opinions of other people affect the choices you make and the things you do. For example, if someone says something about you or your actions, does it make you change what you were going to do? Or do you keep doing what you think is right? Your answer is good! You talked about how you sometimes listen to what others say and try to change your actions because of it. That's important to recognize. Even if you forget sometimes or find it hard to make changes, the fact that you're aware of it is a great first step! Keep up the good work, and don't worry if it's tough sometimes. Learning takes time, but you're doing great! I'm here to support you, so if you have any questions or need help, just let me know. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Homework is very hard. 

>>The homework is very hard. 

I don't think about this question. 

>>I don't know how to answer this question. 

So many think about this question due to weekend. 

>>I am thinking about so many things because it¡¯s the weekend. 

I will listen to other people decisions. 

>>I will listen to other people's decisions. 

It is bed decisions that my feel is very down. 

>>I feel very down when I make bad decisions. 

And I effort fix the my action or word. 

>>And I put effort into fixing my wrongdoings. 

But, I forgot very fast(may be maximum 1day). 

>>But I forget things very quickly, maybe within a day at most. 

And I action the same as usual. 

>>And I do the same things as usual. 

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