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Why is carpentry a skilled profession?

작성자: 박*호
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Carpenter's job is to build safe and comfortable houses for people to live in.
Therefore, carpenters must analyze the blueprint, prepare the necessary materials in advance, and establish a detailed construction plan.
In the past, houses were built using wood, but these days, houses are mainly built using steel and cement, so it is important to study the characteristics of steel and cement and learn how to use them.
In addition, the exterior carpenter must manufacture and then dismantle the form to pour concrete, and the interior carpenter must perform general work related to the interior construction of the building.
Rather than only dealing with wood, they must be able to perform various construction related to interior design, such as decks, temporary walls, ceilings, stairs and middle doors.
Therefore, I believe that carpentry is a profession that requires continuous learning of new construction techniques and a long period of training to develop them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday, Sun!

An experienced carpenter possesses a diverse skill set that allows them to tackle a myriad of projects with precision and expertise. These skills include the ability to interpret blueprints and technical drawings, accurately measure and cut materials, and utilize a variety of tools and equipment.

- Kristine ^^ 

Carpenter's job is to build safe and comfortable houses for people to live in.
>> A carpenter's job is to build safe and comfortable houses for people to live in.
Therefore, carpenters must analyze the blueprint, prepare the necessary materials in advance, and establish a detailed construction plan.
>> Correct.
In the past, houses were built using wood, but these days, houses are mainly built using steel and cement, so it is important to study the characteristics of steel and cement and learn how to use them.
>> Wood was used to build houses in the past, but nowadays steel and cement are mostly used, therefore it's vital to understand the properties of both materials and how to use them.
In addition, the exterior carpenter must manufacture and then dismantle the form to pour concrete, and the interior carpenter must perform general work related to the interior construction of the building.
>> In addition, the exterior carpenter is responsible for creating and then deconstructing the concrete pouring form, while the interior carpenter handles general tasks associated with the building's interior construction.
Rather than only dealing with wood, they must be able to perform various construction related to interior design, such as decks, temporary walls, ceilings, stairs and middle doors.
>> Rather than only dealing with wood, they must be able to perform various constructions related to interior design, such as decks, temporary walls, ceilings, stairs, and middle doors.
Therefore, I believe that carpentry is a profession that requires continuous learning of new construction techniques and a long period of training to develop them.
>> Therefore, I believe becoming a carpenter is a profession that requires an extensive training program and ongoing acquisition of new construction techniques.
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