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Whether risk-takers are more successful or not depends on their ability to deal with the risks or difficulties facing them. We could easily see most of small businesses fail during Corona spread. For academy business, many academies closed due to the financial difficulties. Recently some small and middle-size companies have much difficulties because of wars.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I totally agree! Taking a risk is a decision, but standing by that decision and making the most out of it still depends on the person. If they are determined and have considered all possible factors, then they will most probably succeed.
- T. Caitlyn 
Whether risk-takers are more successful or not depends on their ability to deal with the risks or difficulties facing them. 
>> CORRECT
We could easily see most of small businesses fail during Corona spread. 
>> We could easily see that many small businesses failed during the spread of the coronavirus.
For academy business, many academies closed due to the financial difficulties.
>> For academy business, many academies closed due to financial difficulties.
Recently some small and middle-size companies have much difficulties because of wars.
>> Recently, some small and medium-sized companies have faced many difficulties due to wars.
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