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What is your weakness that hinders you from accomplishing your goals?

작성자: 김*환
2024-04-21 1203

회원님의 영작문

The worst hinder is my age. There is words, a boy is easy to be old, it is very difficult to achieve learning. I have been a software engineer for eighteen years. When I was a fresh man, I was easy to make an algorithm. I could understand new technologies. But now, I can't make an algorithm as fast as before. New technologies are so complicated. So, It isn't easy to understand in short time. That's why. I want to make a team. Working alone has limitation. If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up the rate of technological change. And, I try to keep being healthy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!
Having a team would be a huge help to you. I hope you get one soon. Also, being healthy is the most important. We have to be physically and mentally healthy to achieve all our goals. Good luck in your endeavors!
~ Trixia

Content:
The worst hinder is my age.
- The worst hindrance is my age.
There is words, a boy is easy to be old, it is very difficult to achieve learning.
- There is a quote: A boy is easy to be old; it is very difficult to achieve learning.
I have been a software engineer for eighteen years.
- CORRECT.
When I was a fresh man, I was easy to make an algorithm.
- As a young man, it was easy to make an algorithm.
I could understand new technologies.
- CORRECT.
But now, I can't make an algorithm as fast as before.
- CORRECT.
New technologies are so complicated.
- CORRECT.
So, It isn't easy to understand in short time.
- So, it isn't easy to understand in a short time.
That's why. I want to make a team.
- That's why I want to make a team.
Working alone has limitation. 
- Working alone has limitations. 
If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up the rate of technological change.
- If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up with the rate of technological change.
And, I try to keep being healthy.
- And I try to keep being healthy.
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