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Paper is not as sharp as a blade. To prevent hand cuts, use a thimble to turn over pages. In general, the thimble of a finger is to prevent cutting when paper or cutting. The thimble is easy to turn over the bookshelf when reading a book while protecting your fingers from being cut. Also, we often have our hands cut off by sharp edges of paper. To prevent this, it is better to cut the corners round with a corner cutter.

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Thank you for sharing ways on how we can prevent papercuts. Very good, Mia! ^^
-Khai

Paper is not as sharp as a blade. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> The paper is not sharp compared to the blade.

To prevent hand cuts, use a thimble to turn over pages. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> A thimble can be used to turn over the pages. 

In general, the thimble of a finger is to prevent cutting when paper or cutting. 

>> In general, the thimble is used to prevent papercuts.

The thimble is easy to turn over the bookshelf when reading a book while protecting your fingers from being cut. 

>> The thimble makes it easy to flip the pages of a book while protecting your fingers from being cut.

Also, we often have our hands cut off by sharp edges of paper. 

>> CORRECT

To prevent this, it is better to cut the corners round with a corner cutter.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> We can cut the corners round with a corner cutter to prevent this.


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