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What can we learn from failure?

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Um, I think each person can learn different things from failure.
Some people will learn their weaknesses from failure and others will learn how to overcome despair from failure.
I became another opportunity to discover myself from failure.
To tell you a little bit of my experience, when I failed the university I wanted to go to, I was frustrated, but I was able to find a new interest by changing it into a positive mind that I could do it.
I chose a computer engineering major that I didn't expect and I was quite satisfied with it.
I didn't miss the high rank in the department with my study grades.
In hindsight, I became quite a strong-hearted person.
And then I thought, even if I failed "The journey of finding new joy through a new path comes to me! So, don't worry! There's a road everywhere! I can do it well!"

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Hi, Yun~
It is imperative that we draw lessons from our mistakes... The process is not always as easy as we hope it will be. It's part of the process, for me... We just must discover how to turn failure into success ^_______^
Chammy
Um, I think each person can learn different things from failure.
Some people will learn their weaknesses from failure and others will learn how to overcome despair from failure.
I became another opportunity to discover myself from failure.
To tell you a little bit about my experience, when I failed the university I wanted to go to, I was frustrated, but I was able to find a new interest by changing it into a positive mind that I could do it.
I chose a computer engineering major that I didn't expect and I was quite satisfied with it.
I didn't miss the high rank in the department with my study grades.
In hindsight, I became quite a strong-hearted person.
And then I thought, even if I failed "The journey of finding new joy through a new path comes to me! So, don't worry! There's a road everywhere! I can do it well!"
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