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Q: How can a long distance relationship work out?
A: I think it could work out if both have patience.
When people are in a long distance relationship, they can't know each other easily or quick, so they need to have patience to know each other.
Also, they need to trust each other more because they'll doubt each other easily because they can't meet a lot.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it could work out if both have patience.
>>CORRECT!

2. When people are in a long distance relationship, they can't know each other easily or quick, so they need to have patience to know each other.
>>When people are in a long distance relationship, they won't be able to know each other easily or quickly, so they need to have patience to get to know each other.

3. Also, they need to trust each other more because they'll doubt each other easily because they can't meet a lot.
>>Also, they need to trust each other more because they'll probably doubt each other easily because they won't be able to meet a lot.

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