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My husband's car is also a hybrid. Hybrid cars have many advantages. Hybrids use a mixture of two types of power sources. In Korea, it is usually used as an engine and electric motor. The driving principle of a Hybrid car is that when driving at low speeds, only the electric motor is running and the engine is resting when acceleration is required while driving, or when strong driving forces are needed in an uphill climb, the engine and motor work together. In a typical driving situation, the engine and motor work together to charge the battery to increase energy efficiency.
Hybrid cars are also popular in Korea.

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Thank you for sharing your knowledge about hybrid cars. Good job, Mia! I have shared some alternative sentences. ^^
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My husband's car is also a hybrid.

>> My husband¡¯s car is a hybrid car.

Hybrid cars have many advantages. 

>> CORRECT

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>> Hybrid cars have many features.

Hybrids use a mixture of two types of power sources. 

>> CORRECT

In Korea, it is usually used as an engine and electric motor. 
>> In Korea, hybrid cars use a fuel engine and an electric motor.
The driving principle of a Hybrid car is that when driving at low speeds, only the electric motor is running and the engine is resting when acceleration is required while driving, or when strong driving forces are needed in an uphill climb, the engine and motor work together. 
>> The driving principle of a hybrid car is when driving at low speeds, the electric motor will be used and the fuel engine is at rest. When acceleration is required, for example, climbing a hill, the fuel engine and electric motor will work together. When acceleration is required, for example, climbing a hill, the fuel engine and electric motor will work together.
In a typical driving situation, the engine and motor work together to charge the battery to increase energy efficiency.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> In a typical driving situation, the fuel engine and electric motor will function together to charge the battery to increase energy efficiency.

Hybrid cars are also popular in Korea.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Hybrid cars are famous and usually used in Korea.


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