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회원님의 영작문

I have never participated in game development projects, but I have experience in monitoring gaming communities as a player. I have enjoyed team play using cooperative tools like voice chat and Discord while playing games, and I have been active in gaming communities such as Inven and Naver Game Lounge to share information and enjoy games together. Therefore, I can quickly grasp the criteria and reactions of users towards games. Although I haven't participated in game development projects, I have experience collaborating with diverse teams to create content, such as in film, theater, or news letter. Through similar project experiences and my understanding of games acquired through gaming communities, I now aspire to contribute to game development projects and achieve successful outcomes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Eugene!
Your response effectively highlights your relevant experiences and skills related to the gaming industry although you acknowledge that you have no direct experience with game development yet. It is interesting that you mentioned your experience with gaming communities. Adding specific examples about this aspect could further strengthen your answer and provide more concrete evidence of your capabilities to the interviewer. Overall, your response is well-made! 
~ Teacher Maxine

I have never participated in game development projects, but I have experience in monitoring gaming communities as a player. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> While I haven't directly worked on game development projects, I have gained valuable insights into gaming communities through active participation as a player.

I have enjoyed team play using cooperative tools like voice chat and Discord while playing games, and I have been active in gaming communities such as Inven and Naver Game Lounge to share information and enjoy games together. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> My experience includes engaging in team play through platforms like voice chat and Discord, as well as actively participating in gaming communities like Inven and Naver Game Lounge to share insights and enjoy games together.

Therefore, I can quickly grasp the criteria and reactions of users towards games. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> As a result, I've developed a keen understanding of user criteria and reactions towards games.

Although I haven't participated in game development projects, I have experience collaborating with diverse teams to create content, such as in film, theater, or news letter. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> Despite not having direct involvement in game development, I've honed my collaboration skills by working with diverse teams in other fields such as film, theater, and newsletter production.

Through similar project experiences and my understanding of games acquired through gaming communities, I now aspire to contribute to game development projects and achieve successful outcomes.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Leveraging my experiences in these areas and my deep understanding of gaming acquired through community involvement, I am eager to contribute to game development projects and drive successful outcomes.
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