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If I leared playing basketball..

작성자: 임*준
2024-04-18 1820

회원님의 영작문

What is something you never learned to do but wish you had?

>>> Maybe everyone ever has heard that playing basketball makes you taller. I don't know it is true but it is regretful for me to have no interest on basketball because I'm not tall now. I have liked every sports except for basketball ㅠㅠ . The reason why I didn't like basketball is that there was not basketball lover among my friends. It was a shame to have a friend who likes basketball. But, There is a expression "Birds of a feather flock together". Now I think, The reason why there was not basketball lover around me is that I'm not basketball lover.
A man who liked playing sports except for basketball comes to me who was maybe playing soccer agressively. So It cannot be helped. I just sometimes regret having no interest on basketball by thinking about my height. But I think, there are more important things than height. So I am okay!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Brian!
It sounds like you've explored different sports and found your passion in soccer! It's natural to have moments of regret, but it's great that you've come to the realization that there are more important things than height. Keep enjoying the sports you love, and remember that passion and dedication matter more than anything else!
~ Teach Maxine 

Maybe everyone ever has heard that playing basketball makes you taller. 
>> Maybe everyone has heard that playing basketball makes you taller. 

I don't know it is true but it is regretful for me to have no interest on basketball because I'm not tall now. 
>> I don't know if it's true, but it's regretful for me to have no interest in basketball because I'm not tall now. 

I have liked every sports except for basketball ㅠㅠ . 
>> CORRECT

The reason why I didn't like basketball is that there was not basketball lover among my friends. 
>> The reason why I didn't like basketball is that there was not a basketball lover among my friends. 

It was a shame to have a friend who likes basketball. 
>> CORRECT

But, There is a expression "Birds of a feather flock together". 
>> But, there is an expression, "Birds of a feather flock together." 

Now I think, The reason why there was not basketball lover around me is that I'm not basketball lover.
>> Now I think the reason why there was not a basketball lover around me is that I'm not a basketball lover. 

A man who liked playing sports except for basketball comes to me who was maybe playing soccer agressively. 
>> A man who liked playing sports except for basketball comes to me, who was maybe playing soccer aggressively. 

So It cannot be helped. 
>> So it cannot be helped. 

I just sometimes regret having no interest on basketball by thinking about my height. 
>> I just sometimes regret not having any interest in basketball by thinking about my height. 

But I think, there are more important things than height. So I am okay!
>> But I think there are more important things than height. So I am okay!
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