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My husband had wanted some land or a house in the countryside and looked for it before we had a second house in Heongseong. Hearing that we wanted to buy some land, one of my seniors,who lives in the countryside, called me and invited me to show some land which belonged to her. She said that there would be a railway station to Seoul near the land,and it would be easier to get a permit for development of housing site. My husband liked it, we purchased it from the senior. But later we realized that we couldn't develop the land into a housing site and there was a someone's grave in it. My senior sold her land of trouble.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
It's sad to know that you had a problem with a piece of land sold by someone you trusted. I really hope that this event will turn into an opportunity once that piece of land is developed into a housing site.
- T. Caitlyn
My husband had wanted some land or a house in the countryside and looked for it before we had a second house in Heongseong.
>> CORRECT
Hearing that we wanted to buy some land, one of my seniors,who lives in the countryside, called me and invited me to show some land which belonged to her. 
>> Hearing that we wanted to buy some land, one of my seniors, who lives in the countryside, called me and invited me to see some land that belonged to her.
She said that there would be a railway station to Seoul near the land,and it would be easier to get a permit for development of housing site. 
>> CORRECT
My husband liked it, we purchased it from the senior. 
>> CORRECT
But later we realized that we couldn't develop the land into a housing site and there was a someone's grave in it. 
>. But later, we realized that we couldn't develop the land into a housing site because there was someone's grave on it.
My senior sold her land of trouble.
>> CORRECT
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