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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What¡¯s the most useful mobile app you have on your device, and why?

I think the most useful mobile app is the map app.
I often use this app when I go to the some place or I check the public transportation time.
When I travel abroad, I usually use the "Google map" app.
Because, it has difference from country to country, but it's generally well updated.
But, the case of South Korea, it's a little different.
Because the "Google map" app is not well updated.
As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many function has limit on map apps made in foreign countries.
That's why we use a map application made in South Korea.
These apps name are " Naver map" and "Kakao map".
So, if foreign guest or client come to my country, I recommend the app I just mentioned.
These apps are more useful in my country.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What¡¯s the most useful mobile app you have on your device, and why?


I think the most useful mobile app is the map app.
>> CORRECT!
I often use this app when I go to the some place or I check the public transportation time.
>> I often use this app when I go to some places or when I check the public transportation time.
When I travel abroad, I usually use the "Google map" app.
>> CORRECT!
Because, it has difference from country to country, but it's generally well updated.
>> CORRECT!
But, the case of South Korea, it's a little different.
>>  But, in the case of South Korea, it's a little different.
Because, the "Google map" app is not well updated.
>> CORRECT!
As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many function has limit on map apps made in foreign countries.
>> As far as I know, there are many military bases in S.Korea, so there are many functions that have a limit on map apps made in foreign countries.
That's why we use a map application made in South Korea.
>> CORRECT!
These apps name are " Naver map" and "Kakao map".
>> CORRECT!
So, if foreign guests or clients come to my country, I recommend the app I just mentioned.
>> CORRECT!
These apps are more useful in my country.
>> CORRECT!

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