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Every day of the week requires a proper rest.

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Every day requires a break, so you have to take a break on Friday as well.
Of course, there are Saturday and Sunday after Friday, so there may be people who do not care about the presence or absence of a break.
But rest is like my healing time to relieve my fatigue accumulated throughout the day.
Therefore, I think rest is something you should take every day.

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Hi Da Hye, 

You're absolutely right; rest is essential for recharging and maintaining balance in our lives, regardless of the day of the week. It's great that you prioritize taking breaks to refresh and unwind. Keep valuing self-care and enjoy your well-deserved rest! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Every day requires a break, so you have to take a break on Friday as well. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Every day requires a break, so you should also take a break on Friday. 

Of course, there are Saturday and Sunday after Friday, so there may be people who do not care about the presence or absence of a break. 

>>Of course, there are Saturdays and Sundays after Friday, so there may be people who do not care about the presence or absence of a break. 

But rest is like my healing time to relieve my fatigue accumulated throughout the day. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>But rest is like the healing time for me to relieve the fatigue accumulated throughout the day. 

Therefore, I think rest is something you should take every day. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Therefore, I believe rest is something you should take every day. 

 

 

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