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I have been a software engineer for eighteen years. Being a software engineer isn't easy. I have had improving my skills last eighteen years.
Sometimes I tried to give up being a software enigneer, but I didn't. There is one thing that I am disappointing. When I didn't move to bigger companies than before. My company has a software engineer. That is me. When I make a decision, it's very difficult.

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Hi, Hwanny!
Good to hear from you! Being the only engineer in your company must have been difficult, but think positive! You may have accomplished impossible projects before, though you're the only engineer in your company.
~ Trixia

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I have been a software engineer for eighteen years.
- CORRECT.
Being a software engineer isn't easy.
- CORRECT.
I have had improving my skills last eighteen years.
- I have been improving my skills for the last eighteen years.
Sometimes I tried to give up being a software enigneer, but I didn't.
- Sometimes I tried to give up being a software engineer, but I didn't.
There is one thing that I am disappointing.
- There is one thing that I am disappointed in.
When I didn't move to bigger companies than before.
- I didn't move to bigger companies than before.
My company has a software engineer.
- CORRECT.
That is me.
- That is me.
When I make a decision, it's very difficult.
- CORRECT.
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