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What are some activities or hobbies you turn to when you\'re feeling down or need a pick-me-up?

작성자: 박*호
2024-04-16 1409

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In the past, when I was feeling down or in trouble, I would stay up all night drinking and talking until I got really drunk with my friends.
However, at that time, it was good to forget about the bad things for a while, but in the end, the problem was not solved, so I did not continue drinking and talking with my friends.
Instead of drinking and talking, I chose to take matters into my own hands
First of all, I sweat a lot by riding a bicycle alone or exercising very intensely.
Then, while listening to quiet music, I take the time to think about the things that have bothered me from an optimistic perspective.
I always try to be grateful for everything I have.
Even though I am in a difficult situation, when I think that it is not the worst and that there is still hope, my mood changes and my will to live hard is revived.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Sun! 

When feeling down, activities like exercise, creative outlets such as drawing or writing, spending time in nature, listening to music, and practicing mindfulness can help improve mood. Connecting with loved ones, engaging in hobbies, volunteering, and practicing self-care activities like taking a bath or getting enough sleep are also beneficial. Seeking professional support when needed is essential. It's important to find what works best for individual preferences and circumstances.

- Kristine ^^

In the past, when I was feeling down or in trouble, I would stay up all night drinking and talking until I got really drunk with my friends.
>> I used to stay up all night drinking and talking with my friends till I got pretty intoxicated when I was depressed or in trouble.
However, at that time, it was good to forget about the bad things for a while, but in the end, the problem was not solved, so I did not continue drinking and talking with my friends.
>> However it was nice to temporarily forget the unpleasant things at the time, the issue was not resolved in the end, so I stopped drinking and hanging out with my friends.
Instead of drinking and talking, I chose to take matters into my own hands
>> Instead of drinking and talking, I chose to take matters into my own hands.
First of all, I sweat a lot by riding a bicycle alone or exercising very intensely.
>> First of all, when I exercise vigorously or go on a solo bike ride, I perspire a lot.
Then, while listening to quiet music, I take the time to think about the things that have bothered me from an optimistic perspective.
>> Then I spend some time reflecting positively on the things that have bothered me while listening to some relaxing music.
I always try to be grateful for everything I have.
>> Correct.
Even though I am in a difficult situation, when I think that it is not the worst and that there is still hope, my mood changes and my will to live hard is revived.
>> Even if I'm in a challenging situation, my attitude shifts and my desire to push through hardships becomes stronger when I consider the bright side and that there is still hope.
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