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Hello. T. Sharon! This is my homework.

I think that typical family dinner has soup, rice, and many side dishes. My family usually have dinner its way.
My favorite soup is seaweed soup. Because it is easy to eat fast in the morning.

Bye bye! good night!

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Hi Si Yeon!
Please review our lessons on grammar.
You can use those rules in creating your compositions.
Look at the corrections below.
Make a comparison with our lessons.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think that typical family dinner has soup, rice, and many side dishes. 
>> I think that a typical family dinner includes soup, rice, and many side dishes. 
My family usually have dinner its way.
>> My family usually has dinner this way.
My favorite soup is seaweed soup. 
>> Correct
Because it is easy to eat fast in the morning.
>> It's because it is easy to eat fast in the morning.
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