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Describe someone you look up to and why they inspire you.

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I look up to members of student council of my major. They are hardworking when they do some project or events. As a freshman, I can feel how much they tried. Even student council members respect each other because they do their job of student council well while studying hard. Also most of them have great personality too. So they inspire me to do my best in many areas and not to be lazy.

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Hi Seong Eun,

I wanted to take a moment to acknowledge your excellent work on your homework. Your description of the members of the student council in your major shows a lot of insight and admiration. It's clear that you admire their hard work, dedication to their projects and events, and their respectful attitude towards each other. Your reflections on their qualities and how they inspire you to do your best are very thoughtful. Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I look up to members of student council of my major.

>>I look up to members of the student council of my major.

They are hardworking when they do some project or events.

>>They are hardworking when they do some projects or events.

As a freshman, I can feel how much they tried.

>>CORRECT

OR>>>As a freshman, I can sense their efforts.

Even student council members respect each other because they do their job of student council well while studying hard.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Even student council members respect each other because they perform their roles in the student council effectively while also studying hard.

Also most of them have great personality too.

>>Also, most of them have great personalities too.

So they inspire me to do my best in many areas and not to be lazy.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So they inspire me to do my best in various areas and not to be lazy.

 

 

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