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Actually I don¡¯t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make.
one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(¹Ì¿ª±¹).
One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it.
So that¡¯s why I can make Sea mustard soup.
It¡¯s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)

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Hi Su, 

I think I've tasted sea mustard soup before, and I liked it. It was a pre-made pack though so, I'm not sure if it tastes the same when cooked from scratch. 

-Teacher Ash


Actually I don¡¯t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make.
>> Actually, I don't like to cook so there are just a few dishes that I can make. 

one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(¹Ì¿ª±¹).
>> One of my favorite home-cooked dishes is sea mustard soup (¹Ì¿ª±¹)

One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it.
>> I want to cook one for my family on their birthday. So, I learned how to cook it. 

So that¡¯s why I can make Sea mustard soup.
>> So, that is why I can make sea mustard soup. 

It¡¯s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)
>>It is so easy to cook, and it is also advantageous because you can cook it for people you know especially on their birthdays. That is why I like it. 
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