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April 12th\'s homework

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2024-04-15 1011

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My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time. I can do my hobby what i can't during the week.
So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool. Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig.
and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.
I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window.
If i feel sleepy, i'm take a nap but if i don't, i read a book.
And try to study English or a trade certificate. That's my ideal weekend.
But it doesn't always complete the tasks like this. I spend most of my time watching Youtube.

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Yeon Hee, 

Thanks for sharing your ideal weekend. I know how it feels to do what you love. ^^

-Teacher Ash

My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time.
>> My ideal weekend is enjoying my own time. 

 I can do my hobby what i can't during the week.
>> I enjoy my time by doing the hobby that I can't do during the weekdays. 

So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool.
>> I wake up early and go for a swim in the community pool close to our house. 

 Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig.
>> That is how I would start my day afresh.

and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.
>> After that, I eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching YouTube or Netflix.

I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window.
>> I clean up my room and feel the fresh wind and sunlight from my open window. 

If i feel sleepy, i'm take a nap but if i don't, i read a book.
>>If I feel sleepy, I take a nap but if not, I read a book. 

And try to study English or a trade certificate. 
>> I might also try to study English or study a course to get a certificate. 

That's my ideal weekend.
>> CORRECT

But it doesn't always complete the tasks like this. 
>>However, I do not always complete the tasks like this. 

I spend most of my time watching Youtube.
>>It is because I spend my time watching YouTube. 
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