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Rest is very important!

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I think rest is taking time to reorganize for my tired body and mind.
If we had to work over the weekend without taking a break it would only be fine at first and increasingly impoverish.
Maintaining life feels that there is happiness and joy in this life and something that makes me get back on my feet even if it's hard and the time that makes me rest is essential.
People who only work without taking a break, which they've heard of somewhere, later feel empty when they reach retirement age and have nothing more to do.
That's why there's a concept of resting, but I think it's also a time to find something that can move me even when I don't have work.

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Hi Yun Da Hye, 

You've expressed the importance of rest beautifully! Taking time to recharge is crucial for both our physical and mental well-being. It's great to see your understanding of how rest contributes to a balanced and fulfilling life. Keep up the great work! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think rest is taking time to reorganize for my tired body and mind. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I think resting is taking the time to reorganize my tired body and mind. 

If we had to work over the weekend without taking a break it would only be fine at first and increasingly impoverish. 

>>If we had to work over the weekend without taking a break it would only be fine at first and increasingly impoverished. 

Maintaining life feels that there is happiness and joy in this life and something that makes me get back on my feet even if it's hard and the time that makes me rest is essential. 

>>Maintaining life means finding happiness and joy in it, as well as the things that help me bounce back even when times are tough. Taking time to rest is essential. 

People who only work without taking a break, which they've heard of somewhere, later feel empty when they reach retirement age and have nothing more to do. 

>>People who only work without taking breaks, which they've heard somewhere, later feel empty when they reach retirement age and have nothing more to do. 

That's why there's a concept of resting, but I think it's also a time to find something that can move me even when I don't have work. 

>>That's why there's a concept of resting, but I think it's also a time to find something that can inspire me even when I'm not working. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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