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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What comes to mind when you hear the word 'London'?

There are many words and sentences that hear to mind about "London" and "UK".
Among them, well-known sentence in Korea is "The empire on which the sun never sets".
This means that Britain in the past has a lot of colonies countries.
But, these days the UK is also known as a country of bad food.
England, or London's food is not delicious.
In my experience, there food really didn't tasty good compared to other countries.
The reason is that the quality of food and they doesn't has many kinds of food compared to the high price.
In addition, the most delicious menu was "Fish and chips".
Fortunately, these days London became a multicultural society, we can access to a various of food.
However, strangely, it's not delicious in the London.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What comes to mind when you hear the word 'London'?


There are many words and sentences that hear to mind about "London" and "UK".
>> There are many words and sentences that come to mind when we hear "London" and "UK".
Among them, well-known sentence in Korea is "The empire on which the sun never sets".
>> CORRECT!
This means that Britain in the past has a lot of colonies countries.
>> This means that Britain in the past has a lot of colonies.
But, these days the UK is also known as a country of bad food.
>> CORRECT!
England, or London's food is not delicious.
>> CORRECT!
In my experience, there food really didn't tasty good compared to other countries.
>> In my experience, their food really didn't taste good compared to other countries.
The reason is that the quality of food and they doesn't has many kinds of food compared to the high price.
>> The reason is that the quality of food is not good, and they don't have varieties of food compared to the high price.
In addition, the most delicious menu was "Fish and chips".
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, these days London became a multicultural society, we can access to a various of food.
>> Fortunately, these days, London became a multicultural society, we can have an access to various kinds of food.
However, strangely, it's not delicious in the London.
>> CORRECT!

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